Assignment 8!
After reading all the papers that my peer created I found that they had many incites that I didn’t see. I think this was due to us all either having prior knowledge to debt or not. I think because I didn’t have prior knowledge I was less knowledgeable when composing my paper, versus those who were. I really enjoyed reading everyone’s papers because it gave me a gauge of where I stand with my writing, so I found it very helpful to peer edit. I’m not quite positive one what others thought about my paper, other than that it was a pretty well written piece of work.
When I found out that we had to write another essay about Money As Debt I was a little bit irritated. But as I started writing I did have troubles with my thesis, but I plan to add to the thesis when we can edit our papers again. I think I used a lot of good examples and when I had to explain them I thought I did it appropriately. If I could revise my paper now I would focus more on the purpose and the audience it was based for apposed to just the imagery that was created through out the film. Also, I would like to add in more examples and explain them because my paper is rather short right now. I think by adding the purpose, audience and more example I will be ready to hand my paper in.
