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poisontome:

Ring of Fire - Johnny Cash

LOL

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Shit-ay first drafts

I really enjoyed reading this packet about first drafts. I really liked the part where they quoted this man that is a writer and how every morning he wakes up and says to himself, “you do have a choice, you can either write or kill yourself.” I found this to be rather humorous because it’s obviously not like he would kill himself but I can totally relate to how he feels. I do because it’s the honest truth, we can either do our homework..or call it quits.

The next part of this story that I found to be be humorous was the part about how the narrator said that she was worried that if she didn’t write her draft soon, she was scared that she would get creamed by a car. Her drafts were always so incredibly long that all her colleagues would poke fun at her work and say things like “its just a bit of cake”. She had an issue with being very descriptive and long winded. I find this to be one of my problems when I first start writing. I find myself writing just to write on the page, I guess we have to all start somewhere.

Assignment 10!

Remembrance: The Child I Never Was

I think that this story has a catchy title to it and it has to do with a photograph

Bullet in the Brain

I read the first paragraph to this and it sounds really interesting

Assignment 8!

After reading all the papers that my peer created I found that they had many incites that I didn’t see. I think this was due to us all either having prior knowledge to debt or not. I think because I didn’t have prior knowledge I was less knowledgeable when composing my paper, versus those who were. I really enjoyed reading everyone’s papers because it gave me a gauge of where I stand with my writing, so I  found it very helpful to peer edit. I’m not quite positive one what others thought about my paper, other than that it was a pretty well written piece of work.

When I found out that we had to write another essay about Money As Debt I was a little bit irritated. But as I started writing I did have troubles with my thesis, but I plan to add to the thesis when we can edit our papers again. I think I used a lot of good examples and when I had to explain them I thought I did it appropriately. If I could revise my paper now I would focus more on the purpose and the audience it was based for apposed to just the imagery that was created through out the film.  Also, I would like to add in more examples and explain them because my paper is rather short right now. I think by adding the purpose, audience and more example I will be ready to hand my paper in. 

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